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雅思小作文学生范文 第一篇I am a middle school student. Our school provides us with many kinds of activities. I prefer the sports clu...
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I am a middle school student. Our school provides us with many kinds of activities. I prefer the sports club to others. Therefore, I became a member of the volleyball team and benefitted a lot from it. Fitting as much time as possible results in my healthy body.
As far as I‟m concerned, taking part in the school activities can not only help us learn different skills, but also make us understand the importance of team spirit. Besides, we‟ll feel refreshed after these activities. Only in this way, can we be energetic enough the next day.
It is because the school activities have many advantages that we all like them very much. I‟m sure that they will keep adding colors to our school life.
During the period from 1997 to 20_, the number ofmarriage decreased from million to million,while the number of divorce rose from million to million.
We believe that three reasons may account for thisphenomenon.
First, young people of marriage age are becomingfewer and fewer because of the family planning policy adopted sincethe late 1970s.
Second, the current society is one where fierce competition takes place everywhere, and many young people can’t and won’t get married before they embark on a promisingcareer.
Third, today’s people put more and more emphasis on independence and freedom— they won’t get married before they find an ideal partner, and they will not hesitate to say goodbye when the spark of love dies down.
The great change, in my mind, signals the fundamental shift in people’s view on family andmarriage.
This trend will probably continue as contemporary people pay more and more attention tohigh-quality marriage.
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s very useful. I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.
The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try ?
Have you ever had a feeling of depression caused by fatigue, loss of appetite and irritability upon returning to school or working from holidays? If so, don't panic; you just suffer from the so-called post-holiday syndrome, a catchword which has caught our attention in recent years. As can be told from its symptoms, the syndrome has negative impacts on our life, work, study and health.
There are two main reasons accounting for post-holiday syndrome. To begin with, tracing the syndrome to its source, it is usually caused by irregular lifestyles and overindulgence in the holiday. Furthermore, psychologically speaking, we find it extremely hard to readjust ourselves to the regular schedule after throwing us into thoroughly relaxed lifestyle.
So what can we do to avoid post-holiday syndrome? In my opinion, the most effective way to nip the syndrome in the bud is to keep the same lifestyle during the holiday. Another approach to keep post-holiday syndrome at bay is to retain an optimistic and positive frame of mind, which can help us to stay away from negative moods.
Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers. Today, nothing is more representative of the fast pace of modern society than fast food.
There are several reasons for its popularity. For one thing, it is fast and convenient. Go into a fast food restaurant, and your food will be ready in a minute. Precious time won’t be wasted in waiting-in-line to order or waiting at your table for your food to arrive. For another, its popularity is also attributed to the clean food, the excellent service and the comfortable environment of the fast food restaurants, and American style.
However, I think that fast food isn’t healthy enough because it doesn’t compose a balanced diet and is low in nutrition. Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and we should turn to it only once in a while.
As is shown in the carton, people are often aroused with the feeling of anger or sympathy in this new media age when abundant information just swells within sight. The picture vividly reveals that modern people tend to receive and believe what they get from the media and then react to it directly.
From my perspective, one should think twice upon receiving online comments and speech. To start with, online information could be ungrounded and fictitious just to impress and catch attention. For instance, rumors go around that a celebrity couple is expecting a baby. What's more, reports online could be one-sided, that is to say, they are providing incomplete information and seeing things from one angle. In this way, it is hard for the audience to judge right from wrong, especially when the public opinions lean towards one side.
As an old saying goes, xxxBetter don't read if you believe everything you read.xxx Likewise, one should make his own judgement based on real facts and experience in the era of information explosion.
The pie chart compares figures for visitors to four categories of tourist attraction and to five different theme parks in Britain in 1999.
这个饼状图比较了1999年英国的四类旅游景点和5个不同主题公园的游客人数。
It is clear that theme parks and museums / galleries were the two most popular types of tourist attraction in that year. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received by far the highest proportion of visitors in the theme park sector.
很明显,主题公园和博物馆/画廊是那一年最受欢迎的两个旅游景点。在主题公园中,黑潭快乐海滩获得的游客比例是最高的。
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 38% of the surveyed visitors went to a theme park, and 37% of them went to a museum or gallery. By contrast, historic houses and monuments were visited by only 16% of the sample, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction, with only 9% of visitors.
更详细地看这些信息,我们可以看到,38%的受访游客去了一个主题公园,其中37%的人去了博物馆或美术馆。相比之下,只有16%的样本参观了历史建筑和纪念碑,而野生动物公园和动物园则是这四种旅游景点中最不受欢迎的,只有9%的游客。
In the theme park sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) had been to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. Alton Towers was the second most popular amusement park, with 17% of the sample, followed by Pleasureland in Southport, with 16%. Finally, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland Windsor had each welcomed 10% of the surveyed visitors.(181 words, band 9)
在主题公园领域,几乎一半的被调查者(47%)曾经到过布莱克浦的快乐海滩。奥尔顿塔是第二大最受欢迎的游乐园,有17%的样本,其次是在索斯波特的娱乐公园,占16%。最后,查辛顿冒险世界和乐高和温莎的游客都欢迎10%的游客。
线图:企业垃圾
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 20_ and 20_.
The bar chart compares the turnover in dollars from sales of video games for four different platforms, namely mobile phones, online, consoles and handheld devices, from 20_ to 20_.
It is clear that sales of games for three out of the four platforms rose each year, leading to a significant rise in total global turnover over the 7-year period. Sales figures for handheld games were at least twice as high as those for any other platform in almost every year.
In 20_, worldwide sales of handheld games stood at around $11 billion, while console games earned just under $6 billion. No figures are given for mobile or online games in that year. Over the next 3 years, sales of handheld video games rose by about $4 billion, but the figure for consoles decreased by $2 billion. Mobile phone and online games started to become popular, with sales reaching around $3 billion in 20_.
In 20_, sales of handheld, online and mobile games reached peaks of 17, 9 and 7 billion dollars respectively. By contrast, turnover from console games dropped to its lowest point, at around $ billion.
题目:
The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 20_. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
Living alone in England by age and gender, 20_
Number of bedrooms in one-person households (England, 20_)
There has been a hot topic recently about college students’ being encouraged to help children in the poor and remote areas.
Generally aid-education is helpful in two aspects. First of all, it can broaden volunteers’ horizons in poverty-stricken regions. For instance, it is a golden opportunity for volunteers to experience a completely different life. In addition, college students have to adapt themselves to the harsh living conditions, meanwhile they can make friends with the children.
In my view, the future of China’s education depends on the joint efforts of the society, the government and all the citizens. To sum up, we college students should take the initiative in response to the appeal for supplying help to children in poor regions.
I am a middle school student who is always busy with school work. Luckily, though we have to learn many subjects at school, we can enjoy a number of activities.
In order to free ourselves from studying pressure, my friends and I often take part in different school activities after class. However, I showed great interest in computer science and I spent most of my spare time in our school computer group. I learned to get useful things from the internet so that I could teach my classmates how to use computers. I feel very proud and happy while helping them. I think it‟s important to learn to use computers because not only are they used everywhere in our modern life, but also they help us communicate better with the world. I am keen on learning computer and I would like to put this love to good use by working for our country when I grow up. I‟m sure that my dream will come true if I work hard. • All in all, I have a colorful school life.
In my spare time, I usually take part in different kinds of social practice activities. Personally, it is not only useful,but can also bring us a lot of fun.
First of all, through social practice, we can gain some valuable social experience, which will be useful to our future career. Secondly, we can learn many interesting thingsthatwe can‟t learn in class. Moreover, social practice can help us to increase our confidence. Finally, by taking part in social practice, we can earn money by ourselves and make us more independent of our family.
In a word, with social practice, I am sure our school life will be more colorful and interesting.
1. 积累写作词汇
所以这里我说的积累写作词汇并不是让各位去可以去刻意去积累高级词汇,而是积累一些自己可以在写作里但是自己当时没有想到的词,或者想到了但是不会写的词
随便举个例子,剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 :
我相信大家都知道,大作文第一段可以写成引入题目背景(改写)+表述自己观点
接下来一起来看看范文中的在第一段的第一句是如何引入题目背景的这句话的
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.
这句话说的:是孩子们在很小的时候就了解是非的区别是很重要的。
范文第一段第一句:One important stage in a child's growth is certainly the development of a conscience,which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong.
这句话说的是孩子成长的一个重要阶段当然是良心的发育,这与辨别是非的能力有关。
大家再注意到我标注的-conscience良心,跟stage阶段
引入题目的背景的时候,把句子整个同义替换是很low的,范文里面就把区别是非对错可以理解成跟良心的功能有关;小的时候的确就是我们人生中的某个阶段,这样一换,引入题目背景就很自然的同时,还体现了你对题目背景的合理延伸。
所以写作中词汇并不是越高级越好,而是需要你恰当表达意思的时候有恰当的词汇进行表达,能做到就很厉害了,像范文中这些自己没想到用或者想到了不会写的词汇难道不值得你积累下来吗。
2. 积累好用的句型
这里我说的积累好用句型,并不是指非要各位通篇都能做到长难句,而是恰当的意思用恰当的句子进行表达就好了
比如,剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 范文中的这句话(题目还是上面)
To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish,as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished.
惩罚一个年龄小的孩子是错误又愚蠢的,因为婴儿不明白发生了什么或为什么要惩罚他或她。
这个句子是由主句+原因状语从句构成,说明了惩罚小孩是错误又愚蠢的原因,因果关系显得有理有据。
那么as+句子表达原因的句型,大家就完全可以积累起来,不要碰上原因就统统写because...
3. 形成自己的写作框架
上面谈的词汇跟句型其实都是属于写作的细节,写作除了细节重要外,更加重要的是你的写作框架是否具有合理逻辑。
所以平时除了自己多写之外,记得多分析范文,形成一个自己的写作框架,比如我自己很喜欢的一个大写作框架就是分析Simon的范文形成的
个人见解,仅供参考,你杠你对
开头段:引入题目背景+明确表达自己的观点
主体段(2段):核心论点-分论点(如有)-再展开论据-再重复核心论点(我觉得没必要,看自己)
注意:论据一定是可以去支持你论点的,别瞎套模版
结尾段:呼应开头段就行了,说白了,重申你的观点
请一定注意!!框架只是参考而已,个人有个人的喜好跟习惯!
免费的优质思维学习:
最最更加高效的方式是直接参加高质量的免费公开课(主讲老师是曼切斯特大学语言学教授兼雅思前考官),直接学习大小作文的思路,从最专业的人那里免费学习的机会不多,不要错过。
学会了思路,就利用从助教那里拿到的最新写作题库进行练习,提升写作的整体框架,一方面就是要通过写作的话题,练习写写框架(中英文都无所谓),另外就是多分析范文去形成自己的写作框架去找写作思路之外,多听听考官的角度分析。
雅思备考并不容易,尤其是像写作这种主观性题目,很多学校申请的时候还要看小分,就更加恶心了,所以各位心态放好,该多写就多写,不要让写作拖你出分的后腿。
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The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 20_ and 20_. 从20_年到20_年,这条线图将三家公司的废物产出进行了比较。
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
很明显,图表上显示的这三家公司生产的垃圾量发生了重大变化。虽然A公司和B公司在15年的时间里看到了废物的产量下降,但C公司生产的废物量却大幅增加。
In 20_, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne. 20_年,A公司生产了12吨废物,而B公司和C公司分别生产了大约8吨和4吨废料。在接下来的5年里,公司B和C的废料产量增加了大约2吨,但是公司A的产量下降了大约1吨。
From 20_ to 20_, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 20_, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.(192 words, band 9)
从20_年到20_年,公司将废物产量减少了大约3吨,公司B减少了大约7吨的垃圾。相比之下,C公司在同样的10年时间里,废物产量增加了大约4吨。到20_年,C公司的废物产量已升至10吨,而A和B公司的垃圾量已降至8吨,仅为3吨。
混合图:英国移民
The chart below shows long-term international migration in UK.
题目:
The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-20_.
Here's my suggested outline for a 4-paragraph report: Introduction: rewrite the question statement in your own words.
Overview: point out which category was highest in each year, which was lowest, and which saw the biggest changes.
Details: compare the 3 categories in 1995, then say what happened up until 1999.
Details: notice what happened to local calls from 1999 onwards, and contrast this with the other 2 categories. Finish with a comparison of the figures in 20_.
The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
雅思小作文范文
The pie chart compares figures for visitors to four categories of tourist attraction and to five different theme parks in Britain in 1999.
It is clear that theme parks and museums / galleries were the two most popular types of tourist attraction in that year. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received by far the highest proportion of visitors in the theme park sector.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 38% of the surveyed visitors went to a theme park, and 37% of them went to a museum or gallery. By contrast, historic houses and monuments were visited by only 16% of the sample, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction, with only 9% of visitors.
In the theme park sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) had been to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. Alton Towers was the second most popular amusement park, with 17% of the sample, followed by Pleasureland in Southport, with 16%. Finally, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland Windsor had each welcomed 10% of the surveyed visitors.
(181 words, band 9)
It is universally acknowledged that the best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today. To put in another word, it is wise for us to seize the moment and spare no efforts to finish the current task.
On the one hand, actions play a key role in the course of achieving goals. As a consequence, it is imperative that we should take prompt actions to accomplish a future aim. On the other hand, we are supposed to attach due importance to the efficiency, which exerts a critical impact on personal growth and future career. As a result, improving the efficiency is what we cannot neglect.
In a word, effective and efficient actions must be taken by every individual for the sake of achieving great dreams. If we can make progress little by little, the dream will come true in the near future.
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